Final Critique - Speaking From Experience

The general feedback was that the video was successful in presenting the key messages of organisation and student life. It is comical and serious when needs to be, but light hearted enough to be taken on the chin. 

Feedback:
- funny
- accurate
- nice shots and angle
- relevant music that fits with context
- some shots were out of focus / blurry 
- making more of an intro, like a theme song, instead of silent 
- intense
- not silent bit at the start

If we had more time to develop it and re-film certain parts there were technical aspects that could've been improved. People though the intro should've had sound, or set the scene better, as the contrast into the first scene is quite sharp with the sudden music. The scenes that were unfortunately blurred could be adjusted, with better focus on Harvey's expression at the end, and on the screens when he is typing. Nonetheless, overall people really enjoyed it, and found it very relatable - which is exactly the purpose of the brief.